Re-review for a Resubmit
Okay, I thought this got blammed, as I lost my review for it. It doesn't look like you've made any substantial changes to the game itself besides putting ads on it to generate revenue for yourself. Did you take any of the criticism that we gave you and change the game? No...you did not...you only spent time trying to make money off it. I think instead of trying to put ads on your game maybe you should spend some time editing the obvious flaws that we already pointed out to you. The fact that you did that is just kinda distasteful really.
Like I said before, here are the obvious flaws that the game has. I will outline them for you again.
The problem with most of the levels is that they're way to easy to cheat. For many I didn't follow the intended path at all. Some of the ones with the moving coins you can even just fall down rather than go through the level and just wait for the coin to come to you.
The game lacks any music, which made it kinda boring. Maybe an ambient track in the background at least would be nice, nothing obnoxious. The one sound effect that was in the game was okay, but you should probably add more of those as well, possibly for the jetpack boost, or maybe a sound clip of air for getting stuck in the clouds. Just some sounds to make the game seem more complete.
It was also a tad awkward that when he hit the bottom of the screen he just kinda sat there. Not sure if you should make the bottom of the screen be instant death or expand the game, but it just seemed a bit strange seeing as how we were supposed to be in the sky, and then we were just kinda hanging out on the ground almost...except it wasn't drawn to look like the ground.
The concept overall is good, and I think the game has potential if you work on it a bit. Putting ads on your game and resubmitting it really doesn't solve any problems it has. It's obvious that you're new to making games and I don't think you should be getting caught up in making money so fast, especially off of an amateur game at best with obvious flaws.