Bleh
To put it as kindly as possible, I'd say it's incredibly boring. I see you've added some music, made some changes here and there, and that's good. It really is. I can only imagine what the game was like when Jolly initially reviewed it, because he's a good guy, and I'm sure that was all true. Based upon reading his review, you've made some serious changes, and it made the game a lot more playable.
Things I've noticed:
1) The ball starts off incredibly slow. I read that before it started off too fast, perhaps there is a middle ground here? It was also at a very strange angle as well.
2) The high score table is pointless, basically. It's not only solo pong, but solo scored. I know a lot of game here use a certain high score table that includes everybody. Now, I can't comment on how to add this, as I am not a flash artist, and this game is probably better than I could do myself, but I would seriously consider figuring that out. At least then, we could all compete for high scores everywhere. Now that's some motivation.
3) I know it's your first flash and your using games factory, but the game isn't very rewarding at all. I don't fully understand the limits of the program, but I can tell you right now that this doesn't keep my attention very long at all. You want a feeling of excitement and accomplishment when you play a game, and this really doesn't fulfill either of those needs.
As far as pong goes, I'm sure you're pretty limited. The best thing you could possibly do with a pong game is to make the other paddle the computer, so you at least feel like you're playing someone. That and the high score table that includes everyone I mentioned before.
Other than those things, it's all you. For a first attempt, I'd say the revised version is playable. It's not overly horrid looking, and the music is pleasant. It needs some work still, but at least it's functional.
Keep it up, you'll get it.
-RRC-