Not bad
The voice acting is very good. The emphasis on the word crazier is a bit extreme for sure. I would rework just that one word for sure, because it doesn't seem to match the tone of the rest of the voice acting and makes it seem like you're not being serious about it.
Other than that it was pretty solid. There did seem to be a slight issue with the volume when the song comes in after the last line. Not sure I can tell exactly why but I think it could be cleaned up a bit to sound like it flows better.
I can't really give you any credit for the audio track because it's not yours, but I will admit it was a perfect choice for the voice acting. It matches perfectly.
Overall an interesting listen though. Keep up the great work.
-RRC-