Meh
It's an okay track but the main synth melody sounds out of sync with the drums...it feels out of beat. The synth around :30 sounds good and was a nice change though. When you added the percussion back in though, it sounded out of beat still...that certainly needs some tweaking in my opinion, because it just doesn't sound right.
The song has potential, but sounds like it needs a bit of work. I like the sounds you used, but they just don't seem to flow with the percussion at all. The hissing was a bit strange as well...
The ending sounds a bit unfinished as well. To me the whole song sounds like a work in progress really. If you clean it up a bit and add a proper ending this would sound much better.