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Woah

I'm getting stereo raped in my headphones right now, and listening to a bunch of interesting noises....

Okay I like where you introduced the bass quite a bit. The notes you chose for this are pretty good. Fantastic piano work here.

Okay 3:15 was pretty sick. Now I'm listening to what sounds like a warped guitar solo or something. Doesn't sound all that moving though...the whole track really isn't all that moving to be honest. I can hear the effort that went into this, and how you placed all the notes sounds good, it's just not really all that moving to me. I'll still give you a 9/10 just for pure effort and sound, but this isn't something I'd ever listen to voluntarily.

RetromanOMG responds:

Understood. Still, it's nice that you liked it the one time you listened, lol.

Better

I like the beat on this one a lot, it just gets me how short it is. If you had continued this track and introduced some drums...oh man...that's really what I'd like to hear. Like right where the track ends, continue that same beat, but introduce a sick drum beat and keep rapping. THAT would be golden my friend. Just a bit of constructive criticism hope it helps =) So far you've got a great voice, a great beat here, some interesting lyrics, I just really feel like it should have gone somewhere because it felt like it was just about to go crazy and it ended :(

lol, keep up the good work man.

Not bad

Well the beat was kinda lacking IMO but the vocals were interesting. It seems like you put a lot of time behind the words and had interesting rhymes but I don't see where you've listed them for us to read on this particular track. You should put them in the author's comments on this one too because that's like the main part of this piece.

Not bad overall though as it showcases your obvious lyrical talent. Keep up the good work.

Not bad

Interesting sound you've tried to make here, I really like the drums in this one. The piano seemed a little out of place, but that's just me. Doesn't really sound like a dnb song if you ask me, but NG isn't great on giving us the appropriate genre's so I'll give you a break on that, lol. The electronic melodies seemed to carry the beat pretty well, so no criticism there.

I'd keep it up and make sure to keep making sick drum loops because it sounds like your strong point.

Well

It certainly sounds very Halloweenish and spooky. Perfect for a halloween flash (too bad I fail at flash).

Obviously this is not something I would ever listen to voluntarily like in my car or something, but like I said, as far as for a flash it's perfect. The only criticism I could really give you would be that some of the volume changes seemed a bit extreme. I have stereo headphones and and when the volume cranked up I was like WOAH, had to turn down the volume. Not a big deal though, and other than that - good work.

Jaspeer responds:

Yeah. Thanks for the great review. The dramatic volume changes, we're pretty dramatic. But i guess i liked it that way.

Not bad

Although this certainly isn't my type of music, and I would never listen to it voluntarily, it is good. Seems like you did a really good job with it and I'm not sure why it has such a low score. It almost looks like people were just voting unfairly, so I just want to let you know it's not that bad at all.

I'm guessing that's probably why you asked for constructive criticism on this track, so I'm just trying to explain what I think happened, lol. It's a great track and deserves a MUCH higher score that a .80, that's ridiculous. I would think at least a 2 if I had to vote, but I'm giving you a 5 to make up for the unfair votes. Keep up the good work regardless.

Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review! :)

Not bad

The beat is great, the vocals aren't bad either - they don't come off as cheesy which is amazing. It's also nice that all the words are really clear, I didn't even have to look at the lyrics you wrote to understand what you were saying. You should really consider finishing this because it's just too short and I could see this being totally epic if it was a full song.

Keep up the good work.

Amazing

I just played this in a game that just came in the portal just now and the beat had me drawn into this trance and I couldn't miss a single note O.O

Awesome. Keep up the good work.

lol

This totally sounds epic. Right away I remembered that you were the same artist that made the desert tune. Seems like you kinda have a certain sound I suppose. I could totally see this being used in a flash game menu or flash movie. It sounds like a bunch of soldiers gearing up for an epic battle. Like I can see them waving to their families as they sail out of distance to war, or something like that, lol.

This does sound a bit generic, but I think that's probably a good thing because I don't think many people could pull off that generic battle sound that you have here. Keep up the good work.

BrokenDeck responds:

Thanks! Yeah this and the new version of Desert Journey were done after a recent upgrade to my system. New sounds and hardware. Thanks for taking the time to write so much for the review man!

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