Umm
Well I respect the fact that you put countless hours of work into this, but to me it doesn't sound like something I'd ever want to listen to again. I mean, it sounds really repetitive almost like a video game song at times, but you classified this as jazz.
Sorry, but it just doesn't sound very catchy to me at all, and it doesn't really all seem to blend together very well. If this sounds harsh, don't take it that way, it's just my opinion.