SeeD419's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[In the Elevator]

Hmm

I liked it, it just wasn't very exciting. Not enough happened to make this an interesting submission. It's a really good idea, you just need to expand it a bit and possibly make it go a bit faster. It all happened really slow, which I know was for effect, but it was a little too slow, if you know what I mean. Meh, anyway...keep up the good work.

dookiemoole responds:

alright thanks

[Internal Fires 15]

Awesome

How do you crank these out so fast, I ask? This one was pretty funny, lol. Except for the 'more' guy. It wouldn't be IF without him, but why must he always encourage everybody to continue? Meh, nice IF. Keep up the good work.

csscblackbelt2000 responds:

This episode was written by turkeyindisguise. He is famous for his Fall of Gandalf series, also commonly known as FOG's.

The more Internal Fires movie created, the greater the power becomes, allowing more and more to be made with faster speed.

The "more" character made his first and only appearance in Internal Fires 9. Again, the credit to the plot of this IF all goes to turkeyindisguise.

Thank you for you review.

[The NewGrounds Machine]

Nice!

That was excellent! I love how you drew the machine. I think you could have drawn the flash itself (as in the character) a tad better but other than that, just that it was a bit slow. It wasn't really a problem though because it added to the suspense a bit and all added up decent. Keep it up man!

SwEecH responds:

thanks. A lot. ;D

[Internal Fires 14]

Nice

Hey man, thanks for explainin the last IF to me, I really appreciate that. I voted a 5 for ya to make up for the idiots that'll try and blam this. Good job with this episode! Pretty funny too, lol, I loved that little dance!

csscblackbelt2000 responds:

No problem. I think I have held the secret out for too long and more people should know what Internal Fires is.
Thank you for the review.
In return of the 5, I grant you a save point. You can always count on one of those with my movies. They are Internal Fires!

[Seven black crows.]

That rocked the house

You used Aphex Twin - Windowlicker!!!! I'm so glad I put that in my profile. I found it by complete accident and now everybody's been using it lately! You get a 10 for sound! The animation was awesome! Nice graphics man! I love the shadowing technique you used. Keep it up

Yoshit responds:

Hah, thank you!
I didin't get the song from your profile though (if that's what you were implying).
Thank you for the review! =D

[Las Alturas del Machi-Pic]

It shows effort...

...but lacks any real flash skills. If these are your photoshops, then you definately belong at retrogade instead. If you stole them, then this is just a slideshow with some music...not too interesting. It's not bad...just real slow and kinda boring. With a little work you can get this to be good, just add more to it. It'd be good to fall asleep to though, very soothing and calming.

MarkSolo responds:

LOL im bad in Grafics, im good at Actionscript LOL

[The Heckonomicon; part 1]

Nice

You're a fantastic story-teller, and I really enjoyed that. If this gets blammed, just remember it's only because of the graphics. If you could do some better drawings and animations it'll probably make it. I hope it does anyway. You have my vote, best of luck!

HeckoX responds:

Thanks, I really appriciate it =) And I'm trying to improve the grafics right now =)

[Internal Fires 13]

*Sigh*

I'll never understand this series. Did you loop in infinately or do you just have to wait a really long time before anything else happens? I kept one of them running in the background for 10 minutes and it was still looping. Tell me it's not longer than that....Why don't you just end the episodes right before the loops? Please explain this shit to me, it's bugging the hell out of me. Are you just trying to be funny???

Oh yeah, overall it was good, pretty damn funny, although I doubt that'd be all he would do. He'd be screamin like a bitch rollin on the floor. Hell, I would. Nice sounds though, if you did the voices yourself. I'm tired of those people who put good flash with terrible voice recordings.

csscblackbelt2000 responds:

Yes, I agree.

You and probably the rest of Newgrounds, save a handful of people, will never know what IF's are about, though I will try to explain it to you.

Internal Fires can be just about any little thing. Maybe a feeling, and outside force, or decision, though, the list is numerous and impossible to thoroughly list everything.

Each IF, IF1 - IF13, has portrayed a different IF one may have.

For example, in this IF, the character just sits there, moving his lips. You, on the other hand, would "be screamin like a bitch rollin on the floor."

Get what I mean?
It is a complicated matter and hard to understand at first.

That is my mission though. To the knowledge of Internal Fires to all. Some will refuse it, while others will and already have begun to accept it.

But no matter what, Internal Fires will never die. They cannot. Nor will they ever stop being made or stop period.

Thank you for the review and points!

[A Poninja Story 2]

I love you

ParagonX9 rules ass, major prop on that. The whole movie basically ruled ass, what can I say? Hmmm...you might want to add some wounds and blood though, that's the only thing that pissed me off. They got shot and just disappeared....kinda like those older video games. Maybe try some blood?? Anyway excellent work man! This was the first movie in quite a while I actually enjoyed watching! Keep it up!

DJ-Mann responds:

ill put the blood thing into mind in my next one A poninja story 3:P

[Splak at McDonalds]

He's right though...

I stared at a white screen for like 3 minutes straight...there's something seriously wrong with it. Try reducing the filesize, or adding a preloader.

skijr52925 responds:

Its like 2 years old, I really dont plan to redo it, so sorry.