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[My best and last flash]

Bad

Well I appreciate you effort to be humorous, but this is pretty much a failed attempt. The loading screens went on for way to long to even be funny, and it was obvious that it wasn't a real preloader.

If the flash movie after 'retrying' actually had some content I could see the joke I suppose, but the poorly drawn stick man just isn't doing it for me.

The flash lacks a single audio clip at all, either voice acting or music. The majority of the flash is just staring at a fake loading bar and then you get a bittersweet ending with the stickman. To say the least, this could have used a lot of work. A coherent storyline would have been nice, as well as some sound.

-RRC-

Kieran123 responds:

very true. Next time I make a fake loading screen I'll narrate it. Thanks for the help.

[Produce Prank Day]

Nice toon

Reminds me of like warner brothers cartoons. The animation was actually pretty good here, but the drawings could use some improvement for sure. There didn't really seem to be a lot of depth to the characters, no shading or border at all.

The sound effects were clever and gave it a real cartoon feel, and the tunes were appropriate as well. The errm toon tune.

Overall I'd say the animation was this...animation's strong point. The drawings could use a bit of work and it would have improved it vastly, imo.

Good work overall though, keep it up.

-RRC-

[Windows Vista sucks]

Stupid

Had you done the research you would have learned that Vista is actually faster than W7 in both processing and memory speed. I found eight different benchmarks to support this.

Not only that, but it isn't Vista's fault that your crummy, outdated hardware takes 5 hours to boot up and 17 hours to access the internet. That has nothing to do with your OS.

This is a totally unintelligent creation.

The animation was terrible too.

Flashmaker2010 responds:

I thought the animation was okay.

[R.O.C. Ep002]

lmfao

Dude, I have no idea what it takes to create something like this because it's based off some website and all, but it's still fucking funny. Both these episodes gave me a good laugh, and that's all the really matters.

I imagine this was some sort of a 3D animating template? So it's probably not all 100% your work, but I really don't give a shit. It was funny as hell, keep it up.

ninjadezombidetueur responds:

Thanks, all i really want to do is make people laugh. I suck at animation, so i try to do it with my writing.

[Rotoscope Compilation!]

Not bad

Well, you're the ones who took the class, so you all would obviously know a lot more about this kind of film editing or animation style than I do. The clips are semi-interesting to watch, but not really overly entertaining. Most of them were dancing, which is kinda cool, but not really anything interesting to watch by itself.

It kinda felt like right as the clip was about to be something worth watching that they cut off. I'm assuming this is due to the fact that these were all just assignments for a class and not meant to be something for public entertainment. I mean...it's obvious that you're all doing well in the class and learning things, but as a collab of all of your finished assignments it really isn't anything I'd want to watch again.

Overall a good collab of your work in school, but little value for public entertainment if you ask me - due to a lack of any real plot or humor. Keep up the good work though.

akoRn responds:

thanks.. this juz to practice the rotoscope technique. so no real plot is needed, but that juz our opinion anyway.

thx for the vote , 7-ed n review

[Cast Away]

Umm

I'm not voting zero on this because I'm 'superficial and don't actually look at content." Yes, I will admit that the drawings are probably the worst I've seen in a long time. On top of that, the animation is nothing short of atrocious - it isn't even synced properly. That's not the point though...

Your 'content' is a failed attempt to parody cast away that isn't in any way even remotely funny. Matches? He was stranded on an island in the middle of nowhere...of course he didn't have any matches. You could have said the same thing about a lighter, or a gas stove, it wouldn't matter because he was on an island. He was happy to have made fire from scratch without any of these modern conveniences, and your joke honestly makes no sense at all. There's no clever humor what-so-ever, so I'm not being superficial here, this just honestly sucks and totally deserves to be blammed.

Darwin7 responds:

It wasn't intended to parody Cast Away and my characters aren't on an island. The name is purely coincidental.

[Normal]

Decent

Hmm...well the drawings were really good, and the animation for the voicing and facial expressions was pretty much spot on. I mean, I wish this had some sort of a background drawn in other than just white nothingness, but whatever.

Are these characters supposed to be gay? I'm sorry...but they just really sound homosexual to me and I totally expected one of them to start fellating the other mid-conversation.

The voice acting was actually quite good. The pitch changes in your voice were interesting to listen to and not monotone and lame. Although the quality of the recording was pretty bad. I would highly suggest investing in a better microphone, recording program, or making a cover for yours to avoid picking up any breathing.

Overall not bad. Not much to it, but I guess you've shown with your first submission that you've got potential. Keep up the good work.

AmethystApple responds:

Thanks for the comment. They are not supposed to be gay.. lol.
My microphone is good, it has good potential. I am just messed up with the SWF and MOV settings.. X_X
If you know how to set it to a good quality... because with the flash file it didn't have these. I set it to the highest setting I could.. but it kept on doing these annoying static voices.
I really thank you for your feedback. I see this site is much more helpful than youtube, since in youtube no one ever comments on my vids, and I love to get feed backed, weather it's good or bad. (:

[DigitalPrison]

lol

Jesus is a sneaky bastard, but I found him.

I like this quite a bit, the animation is great and the art has a great style to it. Not to mention the message it sends is great. I think the concept is good and it was executed really well.

Adding medals to find hidden characters was a great idea, and made it have good replay value. The main screen menu looked good, and was functional. All the sound effects were appropriate, and the music was pleasant to listen to.

Not sure what's up with the guy's ass...didn't really want to see that, but whatever. Overall a decent animation. keep up the good work.

wynand responds:

=) thank you for the detailed review, i always strive to make things better but i think asses will somhow always remain in my cartoons haha =).