Well, you can't please everybody...
I can tell that you put effort into this, and by the sounds of the reviews below me, it's a good song, but I'm honestly just not really feeling it. I hear the jazz elements, but they just don't really seem to stand out. In fact, I heard them and I went to check what genre you submitted this into, and it was "Miscellaneous," and I thought to myself, exactly. It sounds totally miscellaneous and I honestly don't know what to think of it. Don't get me wrong, the piano was beautifully done, and I enjoyed listening to those parts, this just doesn't seem like something I would voluntarily listen to again. Oh well though, that's just me. Even though this song isn't for me, it's obvious you have talent. Keep up the good work, and I'm sure I could find a song of yours that I liked =)