Wow
I must admit I'm a bit impressed. The way you blended all of this together is amazing. What a nice full complete sound! Fantastic arrangement. I like the instruments you picked, they sound great together. Nothing really else to say, because you didn't create the original song, but as a remix, it's great. Keep up the good work.
Thank you =)
Ohh
A story track? This is something I've never seen in the audio portal before. There isn't even a proper genre for this, lol.
Well, as far as the audio track is concerned, it's a nice little tune. Perfect for a game, most likely an RPG, and I can totally imagine paging through character dialogue. It looks like you've provided the dialogue for us to read as well, lol. I don't really understand the story at all, I'll be honest. Maybe you should number your tracks? (1of5) or something like that so people don't start in the wrong place. Without the numbers it's just impossible to figure out where to begin with how many tracks you have.
Anyway, maybe that's not what you were going for, it just looks like it. Good track overall. Nothing I'd listen to voluntarily, but I think it would be absolutely perfect for an RPG.
you can listen from beginning till end by guide of the first uploaded till the last, the whole album is uploaded wholly in order.
greets -cal.
Nice
Not bad, the main melody is pretty awesome and I like how you blended it all together. It seems to flow very well, and the name you gave it seems totally appropriate after listening to it. I'm also glad that you switched up the main melody a tad so it doesn't get overly repetitive or boring.
The stereo panning you did is absolutely awesome. I'm not sure if that was intentionally, because it sounds pretty subtle, but it sounds just awesome in my headphones.
I think at some point the beat does get a little stale halfway through the song. I don't have really any suggestions of the top of my head, but I think you could have switched it up a bit and added something to make it sound more complete. Other than that a pretty solid track, just a tad repetitive at one point. Keep up the good work.
thx :3 and yea the panning i did the panning both on the automation and did some fx's on the vst so it do it automaticly
it indeed gets kinda boring because i only did use 15 instruments O,o
but i did automate it alot...and i personaly like the final part without the kick :3
and i will :3 thx for reviewing
Pretty cool
Well it's definitely an interesting mix. A lot of different synths and noises going on here, and they're all blended together very well. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. The melodies you used are all pretty good, especially the high pitched part, I like that quite a bit. The song seems well put together to be honest, but nothing really stands out to me. I'm kinda out of the Trance stage I used to be in though, so maybe that's why it's all starting to sound the same to me. Fantastic blending on this piece though, flows very well. Keep up the good work.
Well, I know that I usually learn by making more generic stuff first and kind of getting a feel for the genre before going out and experimenting. So I hope to make more interesting stuff in the future.
Thanks for reviewing!
Not bad
I'm not really into rap, but this sounds pretty sick man. The background beat is just sick. The bassline sounds like it just thumps too. You should post up the lyrics in the author comments so we can read them too. The megaphone voice in the background sounds kinda out of place if you ask me, but everything else sounds alright. Did you make the beat yourself? Or did you just flow to it?
Overall not bad though, keep at it, you've got potential for sure.
Thanks man. I will post the lyrics soon. I didn't make the beat though, I wish I could have though.
Hate to break your 10 streak
This is definitely good, and I like how everything blends together really well, but the main riff just really isn't all that catchy in my opinion. It's cool sounding, just not all that moving if you ask me. It would probably be great in a flash game or flash movie for something fast paced, but it's nothing I'd listen to voluntarily. I'm not really a trance guy though. I do like your basslines, but the drums seem a tad repetitive, and the main riff just isn't doing it for me. Seems trendy and not really anything extraordinary.
You obviously have talent in trance though, so keep up the good work. I'd like to see more from you in the future and hear some different sounds you can come up with ;)
Hmm. Thanks for taking the time to review it anyway.. Quite appreciated.
Bit sorry for the repetetiveness, but this song was made to my own taste, and may not fit other's..
Wow
I don't understand why this would get zero bombed. This is awesome. I let this play in the background while typing up a big post, and it's totally badass. Obviously it has its flaws, but for the most part it's good. Maybe it's because the audio portal is a tad Trance biased, and people can't appreciated different genres of music. Idk really, just a guess.
Anyway, the vocals are sick. Right off the bat the voices in the beginning and throughout the song are just awesome. They totally fit the mood and blend really well. The growls in the song remind me of the old days of listening to Coal Chamer. I'm not sure if that's what you were going for at all, but it sounds just like it, and it's fucking badass. The instruments all sounded legit, nothing insanely catchy, but I suppose it would need a better EQ or a producer to reach maximum potential, as with any rock/metal/heavy music. That's just a given though.
The only thing I'm left wondering that you should list is how was this made? Is this your band? Did you play each instrument seperately and mix these via computer? Or were these all made in a separate program? I'm really curious to know, please list that as it would help reviewers a lot. All in all though sick, I loved the vocals. The singing sounded a tad cheesy, but the growls were sick as fuck and the voice acting was perfect. Keep up the good work.
Thanks! That's extremely useful!
I made this on my own in my room. I use reaper DAW as my program to mix the instruments which i play together. I use EZDrummer for the drums, and DSK Bass for the bass.
I am in a band, but we haven't gotten anywhere as of late, but we do have some songs recorded in my room, which isn't a bad start.
Thanks for the review, it's greatly appreciated!
Damn
This is awesome. Totally my style. The beginning did have a real 8 bit sound to it, and I honestly wasn't expecting the break at all and it was so awesome when it just came out of nowhere. I was like, oh yes...yes lol. Has a real aphex twin drum sound to it. Okay, I'm downloading this, lol. I can't really give you any constructive criticism sorry, it just sounds perfect. Maybe the ending could have been a bit better I suppose. It really did seem to fall out of nowhere, much like it began, lol. Only the ending could have really used a fade out. Please keep it up and keep making music, lol. Your drums are fucking awesome.
wow dude thanks a lot! I appreciate your awesome feedback!
I'm glad you liked it =D
Nice
Nothing I'd listen to in the car obviously, but it does have a really good sound to it. I pictured some kind of nightmare before christmas shit. All the sounds were blended together really well and the build up to the climax just sounds perfect. Not really much criticism I can give you here, it sounds complete. It has a really finished sound to it. Keep up the good work.
Sorry for the late response, been hard at work like the others. thanks alot for the review, glad you enjoyed!
Not bad man
Pretty pleasing to my ears, actually, and I don't lie about my reviews. I'm totally honest. I'm not HUGE on trance, but this sounds like something I could see myself listening to. I really don't have any constructive criticism for you, it's an interesting sound you got here, and everything sounds good together. I suppose maybe you can try toning down the background noises just a TAD, you know to blend everything a little better, but not by much. The fast paced drums I really like. Ah, fuck it, I'll download this =)
Overall a decent track. Keep up the good work.
thanks for the great review dude :-)
I appreciate it
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