lmao
Wow man these are really funny. The animation needs some work, but the script on this one is hilarious too. I wouldn't change the voices, as they're hilarious. The only thing that you still need to work on is the art and the animation. You'd have a golden series if you could get those two things down.
Keep up the good work.
hilarious
To be honest, I remember protecting this when it came through the portal, and it pops in my head from time to time. "Excuse me, excuse me, but where the hell are your legs?" LMFAO
It's so cruel and hilarious when the camera pans to the guy with no legs. I suppose the only thing you really need to work on is the art and animation. Other than that, you did a good job with this, the script is great, you just need to spend more time on these.
Keep at it.
Agree
The script is great, and the short is actually pretty funny. The only thing you need to work on is the drawings and animation, but the music is funny, and the voice is too.
Guess this is going to be a somewhat spammy review, but I really don't have any other criticism. The humor is good, the art and animation just needs some work.
Keep at it.
Decent
Hmm...well the drawings were really good, and the animation for the voicing and facial expressions was pretty much spot on. I mean, I wish this had some sort of a background drawn in other than just white nothingness, but whatever.
Are these characters supposed to be gay? I'm sorry...but they just really sound homosexual to me and I totally expected one of them to start fellating the other mid-conversation.
The voice acting was actually quite good. The pitch changes in your voice were interesting to listen to and not monotone and lame. Although the quality of the recording was pretty bad. I would highly suggest investing in a better microphone, recording program, or making a cover for yours to avoid picking up any breathing.
Overall not bad. Not much to it, but I guess you've shown with your first submission that you've got potential. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the comment. They are not supposed to be gay.. lol.
My microphone is good, it has good potential. I am just messed up with the SWF and MOV settings.. X_X
If you know how to set it to a good quality... because with the flash file it didn't have these. I set it to the highest setting I could.. but it kept on doing these annoying static voices.
I really thank you for your feedback. I see this site is much more helpful than youtube, since in youtube no one ever comments on my vids, and I love to get feed backed, weather it's good or bad. (:
Meh
Well it certainly was a bit funny, but overall there just wasn't much put into this. There's no animation besides the guy moving while laughing, and although the track is a bit funny, it sounds like you could have recorded it in better quality.
The drawings are good, but there just isn't enough here to even critique really. It's just too short and basic.
Don't get me wrong, overall I think it's funny, I just can't see myself giving you any higher of a rating for something that took such little effort - especially when I see holes for improvement.
Keep at it.
lol
Jesus is a sneaky bastard, but I found him.
I like this quite a bit, the animation is great and the art has a great style to it. Not to mention the message it sends is great. I think the concept is good and it was executed really well.
Adding medals to find hidden characters was a great idea, and made it have good replay value. The main screen menu looked good, and was functional. All the sound effects were appropriate, and the music was pleasant to listen to.
Not sure what's up with the guy's ass...didn't really want to see that, but whatever. Overall a decent animation. keep up the good work.
=) thank you for the detailed review, i always strive to make things better but i think asses will somhow always remain in my cartoons haha =).
wow
I read darkusPrince's review, and started watching and trying to put in a dip of copenhagen. After realizing what I was listening to and watching, I pretty much just laughed for the remainder of the video totally unable to put a dip in my mouth.
I'd like to thank you for this stupid video, and darkus for his review as they both gave me a good laugh.
lol
So I'm supposed to give you my e-mail address here in the review, and then if you e-mail me, I don't have to come to Newgrounds and watch this?
I guess that means if you do e-mail me, I have to come look at it again...
Either way this is hilarious. It honestly makes me laugh every time I see it. The flapping fish mouth and the looping audio track about John's new show...pretty funny actually. It's funny and not obnoxious like most kitty krew turds.
I honestly can't wait to see the next installment.
Meh
The presentation is awful. You've got some good video editing skills, but zero taste in production. Nobody wants to watch a small embedded youtube player, and the score is an obvious reflection of that. I followed the link to see if maybe the player could be expanded, and found it could be on youtube, but not here. However, you didn't upload this in HD. In fact, I can't even get 480p with this, so it's straight standard definition and it looks terrible expanded anyway - let alone full screen. I'm not really sure why you would render this in SD at all. Not only that, but I guarantee the file size can't be that big. Not near as large as if you rendered this in high quality at least.
As far as the animation/video editing itself, it had a nice feel to it. I probably saw more text flash before my eyes than I've seen in any other video, period. The 'crazy text' effect started to get old really fast and you continued it throughout the entire length of the animation. The little girl was probably the best part about the animation, and I think you could have expanded upon that a bit. The whole video had a great theme to it and I think I understand what you're trying to convey pretty well.
The music was probably the best part about the piece. That track was really good, and it fit the animation amazingly. I was curious about who did the piece but I see you've failed to list it under the "Author and File Information." You're supposed to credit them though. I mean, you could have at least listed the work you put into this, what software you used to produce it, the file size, etc in the author comments.
I checked the comments out on youtube and you listed very little also. Doesn't look like you're a very big name on youtube either. Personally, I have over 20 times more subscribers than you do and my videos are all in Hi def, so you can take my advice or not, it's whatever, but if you want to improve and get some attention to these you should take my advice.
Overall I'd say the editing you've done here is decent, but like I said, a tiny standard definition video just doesn't look all that impressive.
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WHY???
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BRUCE.
Good work
Very nice indeed. The drawings of the characters was very basic, but done well. All the scenery and background were good as well. The animating was above average I would say, and probably is why this is doing so well, not to mention the fact that it's quite humorous.
The drunk voice acting was done pretty well. Sounds like a lot of people I've heard at parties, lol. The sound effects all blended in well too. As far as the story, it was funny. The animation wasn't very long, but for a short, it's definitely a good one. Keep up the good work.
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