SeeD419's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fahrenheit 451 Comic: 1 of 2]

Nice

Well the image is HUGE so that's nice. No squinting to read anything at full size at all. The drawings were great, and I'm rather impressed that you did this with a laptop mousepad. I can barely use the damn things to browse the internet, lol. The comic seemed to flow pretty well. None of the pics had any backgrounds, but I suppose that's alright considering many do not. Other than flow, the humor was okay...I mean I didn't exactly fall out of my chair laughing, but I get the joke.

Not bad overall. I give it an 8/10. Keep up the good work.

Iplaygames responds:

Lack of background was due to lack of time... While making this it froze up and crashed constantly leading to frustration and starting over.

[English Teacher]

Fantastic

What a great drawing here, also comical. Looks very convincing and also very crisp and clear. Love it. Most of the image is filled with green emptyness, which I think you could have filled with classroom scenery of just about anything else to fill the void would have been nice, I think. I'm sure with drawings like this that your comics will be amazing.

I like this, keep up the good work.

Iplaygames responds:

A background... That's understandable. Scenery IS the one thing I do need to work on. The comic (I'm planning on) is going to take place in a coffee shop... So, I'll get around to working that in.. Likely going to be my greatest challenge.

Appreciate the review.

[The Hills]

Not bad

A pretty decent painting here although it feels like a lot of empty space. I would have found this much more interesting with a stream flowing through it or maybe a dense population of trees growing. It just seems so barren as it is, almost like an unfinished piece.

The landscape you have painted so far looks great though. I would say it shows that you have potential. Keep working at it.

Joshsouza responds:

That's actually all there was in the reference. I am pretty sure my reference was 'shopped. Thanks for the Critique. Look at my newest ones because they are much better.

[Homersaur]

Decent

Well, although I don't particularly find this funny or interesting, you did an okay job with it. The T.V. looks pretty good and the Simpson dinosaur was drawn alright. I'm not really sure what motivated you to make something like this...

I'm going to assume you grabbed the static picture from the internet since the last person asked you about it and you failed to answer, and since a good portion of this image is static, that means you really didn't make like sixty percent of the image. I don't understand why there would be static on the T.V. seeing as there's a picture of a Simpsons character as a dinosaur but okay...

All in all I'd say the drawing is okay I suppose, I just don't get it...

up-a-notch responds:

I drew the character first...

[I-Bot]

Awesome

Love all the colors in this. The empty space is kinda begging to be filled, but as far as the left side of the picture it's amazing. Very convincing, the robot just looks amazing. He looks a little timid, lol. Not to sure what Image-Bot does, but whatever he does, he apparently must feel like a dick about it because he's acting like NG users are about to attack him, LOL. Just messing, great image, keep up the good work!

[Lennon]

meh

Well, it's a decent small lennon, that's for sure. I'm not sure why you would upload this alone to the art portal if you have an upcoming game coming out, though.

There just really isn't much about it to criticize. It's a very, very small man drawing. I mean it looks okay I guess, there's just not anything extraordinary about it.

If you uploaded this for feedback alone on if it should make it into the game, you should have put more in the author's comments about the game type and what it was going to be about, IMO.

[The Sugar Claws]

Nice

That creature looks like a real asshole, and I love the lines you drew around it. Obviously this lacks any color variation, but I think it worked out really nicely. Nice piece here, keep up the good work.

Celx-Requin responds:

Thanks,
- Celx

[VICTORY!]

Pretty good

I could tell right away it was pastel. Looks pretty good if you ask me. I don't really know what else to say about this...it looks alright, but it doesn't seem extraordinary to me. It's obvious that you have talent though, so keep up the good work.

Merol responds:

THANK YOU!!!
And yeah, I actually didn't know what was I doing when making it, and I just went crazy with the pastel.

[Typho]

Umm

Sorry bro, but this looks like something a little kid drew. The fact that you wrote your name and age on it like that makes it even worse. The scribbling and the labeling....I don't really know what kind of feedback you're looking for here. Did you really even try to make this? Is this a joke?

ZJ responds:

This is not a joke. This is my pièce de résistance.

[DAD]

damn

Dad's a fuckin beast, maybe he should lay off the roids, eh? Hah, great picture here! Keep up the good work!

Cope2K responds:

Haha yeah them roids will make you look huge. I wanted to make him and the other characters in a bit of a different style so that's why he looks more cut than the original. Glad you like it!